This is a record of a class blog at Edmund Hillary School, Auckland, New Zealand.
Thursday, 26 November 2020
Compare and contrast
Monday, 23 November 2020
Among us book
One day or night in the ship there were a lot of people around me, even my brother. Now we were in a cafeteria. They had a table in there and they even had one leftover pizza on top of the table and; also one emergency button on top of the table.
They have a vent in the cafeteria. I wonder if I can vent but I don’t want to do it in front of people. I was now walking to Medbay. I saw black was doing a scan. There were four beds in Medbay; they also have a vent too. In Medbay they have a huge TV with a keyboard in there. I saw purple. My brother was closer to black during the scan. I saw my brother venting and I also saw black dead body closer to the scanner. I vented Medbay to security because I was so scared if I got caught. In security they also have a huge TV but it is a security camera TV. I saw the light was going down and then now everything was black till then I had night vision. Everything was now clear. When I was alone with yellow my body felt weird. I felt like I was an alien, my mouth was open with sharp teeth inside. My space suit was ripped and showed my mouth and till then my sharp tongue was sticking then I stabbed yellow with my tongue. And then I hear a scary sound. I think it is our victory sound.
Made by: Jack Sheppard and Jurgen Sheppard
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Friday, 13 November 2020
My Analysis
Wednesday, 4 November 2020
My texts about the sea and more: Jack and Jurgen
Find your own videos, articles and stories about the sea!
Fill out this table to compare and contrast the mood and atmosphere of these texts.
Name + Author | Atmosphere | Mood | How did the author create this mood and atmosphere? | Language features you can spot |
| The sea was kinda calm and it looked like they were finding their home. | calmness, peace of mind, scared, and sus, proud, fearless. | He uses personification and emotivity. Dizzy too many things on her mird, Freaking out stressed. | Emotive language: Hame,Tiny and Taken. Personification: Her mind was racing sick. |
| The wild band of horses was. | Wild, Sad, Loud, annoying,made-up, fanciful. | He or she uses fiction. Is to make up a story. | Emotive language: Live, surrounding, touris, Alive. |
| It was quiet and boring. | Bored,quiet, and perplexed. | She uses nonfiction. And composition,essay and fiction. | Emotive language: Composition Saturday. |
| It was satisfying and it was an adventure. | Deserted, desolate, destitute and empty. | They use sound and 3D animation and voice. They use colours and | Emotive Language: Lost Memory loss Adventure finding. |